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Topic: hey i know im knew and all but take a look at this... tell me what you think...
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i see her standing alone...
i want to be with her,
but im stranded behind a glass wall
and dont know what to do...
i see her teaars,
i try to do something,
but she canÕt hear me,
im drowning in my own words....
i see a beautiful soul...
i want to scream her name..
the walls disappears,
but yet i feel held back....
i cant say a word,
her angelic like beauty,
has taken my breath away...
i want to get closer,
but she disappeared...
now ive found her....
but she doesn't know,
i whisper in her ear,
she turns and cant see a thing....
but im standing right there...
i want her to see me,
but dont no how...
i want to feel her touch,
but somehow feel ominous
i know she can hear me...
and you know who you are....
you just dont know....

.....that im the one you looking for.......
Nov 1, 2006
1:15 PM

Posted by XxEmoTeddyxX 

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Hey, that's really good! Very relatable.
Feb 11
5:36 PM

Posted by Laine Louis

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